IV. Hermione Snape’s lists of the fallen
The list Hermione Snape kept in Azkaban prison was comprised of 95 names, three of which were survivors because she did not know they had lived (Draco Malfoy, Minerva McGonagall, Severus Snape).
- Professor Babbling
- Katie Bell
- Andromeda Black-Tonks
- Regulus Black
- Sirius Black
- Amelia Bones
- Susan Bones
- Terry Boot
- Lavender Brown
- Professor Burbage
- Cho Chang
- Michael Corner
- Colin Creevey
- Dennis Creevey
- Crookshanks
- Fleur Delacour
- Dedalus Diggle
- Cedric Diggory
- Dobby
- Albus Dumbledore
- Dudley Dursley
- Petunia Dursley
- Vernon Dursley
- Fang
- Arabella Doreen Figg
- Firenze
- Argus Filch
- Seamus Finnigan
- Filius Flitwick
- Anthony Goldstein
- Jean Granger
- Patrick H. Granger
- Grawp
- Rubeus Hagrid
- Hedwig
- Professor Hooch
- Angelina Johnson
- Gwenog Jones
- Hestia Jones
- Lee Jordan
- Viktor Krum
- Alice Longbottom
- Augusta Longbottom
- Frank Longbottom
- Neville Longbottom
- Luna Lovegood
- Xenophilius Lovegood
- Remus John Lupin
- Teddy Remus Lupin
- Nymphadora Lupin-Tonks
- Ernie Mcmillan
- Magorian
- Draco Malfoy
- Narcissa Malfoy
- Griselda Marchbanks
- Olympe Maxime
- Minerva McGonagall
- Alastor Moody
- Mrs. Norris
- Theodore Nott
- Tiberius Ogden
- Mr Ollivander
- Pansy Parkinson
- Irma Pince
- Poppy Pomfrey
- Harry Potter
- James Potter
- Lily Potter
- Eileen Prince
- Proudfoot
- Madam Puddifoot
- Augustus Pye
- Madam Rosmerta
- Kingsley Shacklebolt
- Rita Skeeter
- Horace Slughorn
- Zacharias Smith
- Severus Snape
- Professor Sprout
- Mr Thomas
- Dean Thomas
- Ted Tonks
- Sybill Trelawney
- Emmeline Vance
- Professor Vector
- Arthur Weasley
- Molly Weasley
- Bill Weasley
- Charlie Weasley
- Percy Weasley
- George Weasley
- Fred Weasley
- Ron Weasley
- Ginny Weasley
- Winky
At the very back of her diary—squeezed between the back cover and the last page—Hermione Snape wrote down a revised version of her list after Padma Patil went over the first version of her list with her on 22 August 2009.
- Professor Babbling
- Katie Bell
- Andromeda Black-Tonks
- Regulus Black
- Sirius Black
- Amelia Bones
- Susan Bones
- Terry Boot
- Lavender Brown
- Professor Burbage
- Cho Chang
- Michael Corner
- Colin Creevey
- Dennis Creevey
- Crookshanks
- Fleur Delacour
- Dedalus Diggle
- Cedric Diggory
- Dobby
- Elphias Doge
- Albus Dumbledore
- Dudley Dursley
- Petunia Dursley
- Vernon Dursley
- Fang
- Arabella Doreen Figg
- Firenze
- Argus Filch
- Seamus Finnigan
- Filius Flitwick
- Florean Fortescue
- Victoria Frobisher
- Anthony Goldstein
- Jean Granger
- Patrick H. Granger
- Grawp
- Rubeus Hagrid
- Hedwig
- Professor Hooch
- Angelina Johnson
- Gwenog Jones
- Hestia Jones
- Lee Jordan
- Viktor Krum
- Alice Longbottom
- Augusta Longbottom
- Frank Longbottom
- Neville Longbottom
- Luna Lovegood
- Xenophilius Lovegood
- Remus John Lupin
- Teddy Remus Lupin
- Nymphadora Lupin-Tonks
- Ernie Mcmillan
- Magorian
- Narcissa Malfoy
- Griselda Marchbanks
- Olympe Maxime
- Alastor Moody
- Mrs. Norris
- Theodore Nott
- Tiberius Ogden
- Mr Ollivander
- Pansy Parkinson
- Irma Pince
- Sturgis Podmore
- Poppy Pomfrey
- Harry Potter
- James Potter
- Lily Potter
- Ernie Prang
- Eileen Prince
- Proudfoot
- Madam Puddifoot
- Augustus Pye
- Madam Rosmerta
- Kingsley Shacklebolt
- Rita Skeeter
- Horace Slughorn
- Zacharias Smith
- Professor Sprout
- Mr Thomas
- Dean Thomas
- Ted Tonks
- Sybill Trelawney
- Emmeline Vance
- Professor Vector
- Arthur Weasley
- Molly Weasley
- Bill Weasley
- Charlie Weasley
- Percy Weasley
- George Weasley
- Fred Weasley
- Ron Weasley
- Ginny Weasley
- Winky
Something bothered me about the two lists of names, and it took me a while to figure it out. Minerva McGonagall’s name is not on Hermione’s first list of the fallen. There are 95 names listed, but none of them is Minerva’s. With hers on the list there would have been 96.
Please forgive me. I am cursed with an analytical and technical mind. *shakes head* Not good for much else, I afraid. LOL!
Beth
Of course it’s rather sad that you have nothing at all to say besides a rather minor nitpick. However, I am naturally grateful that you pointed this tiny glitch out to me, and I’ve been happy to correct it.
I’m so sorry that I came across as such an asshat. That was never my intention. I have inhaled this story in the last couple of weeks (first on TPP and then finished on OWL today), and I left what I hope were intelligent comments for each chapter.
There were such tantilizing hints in each chapter that kept me going from one to the next, and I love trying to connect all the dots. I am an analytical person by nature and by training, and I let that side of me take over when I came here to see the lists. I had read some of the comments that other readers had made about the Editor’s Notes on OWL, and was interested in combing through the data to see if I would recognize any of the characters missing from Hermione’s first list. I felt like Hemione with her counting.
You are one of my favorite writers, and Prisoners of Azkaban is one of the most compelling and uniquely constructed stories I’ve ever read. I got carried away with my “dot connecting”, and I apologize for my comment here. I feel terrible about this and hope you will accept my apology. I am humbly sorry.
Beth
aka beffeysue
It’s okay, no worries. *hugs* In a way, I’m really thrilled you paid such close attention! I mean, in more than a year (!) of having the story posted here, you’re the first person who noticed! I just had this moment of disappointment when I thought “Wow, someone came all the way to my website for the story, wonder how they liked it” … and then it was only about the missing name. 🙁
I still have to get caught up on replying to comments on the other sites, and I have to admit it’s very difficult for me to keep all names and addies straight between FFNet, OWL, TPP, AO3, and my own site at all times. I guess for you it felt like just one of ALL the comments you left. While for me, I’m sorry to say, it just didn’t connect with all the other comments. Lately I’ve been having an awful time with keeping even the people I interact with more regularly with straight, what with most people having different names on Buzz than on LiveJournal or the archives. I hope that explains my reaction a bit.
And I’m so glad that the counting didn’t put you off. When I set out writing, I wasn’t sure if that “tick” I chose for Hermione wouldn’t drive people crazy. I have to admit, during the writing process, there were times when I felt it was driving me round the bend. (But I promise I never started counting squares.)
Thank you again for reading and noticing my mistake; if you look at the list again, you’ll find the name where it belongs!
Thank you for being understanding, and forgiving the “ticks” we analytical types are apt to have.
I read this story over at least once a year at FanFiction.net, and this time I decided to check out the CSS3 version on your site – I loved it! All the extra little details that you just don’t get over at FF really contribute so much to the story, and the amount of time and attention to detail you’ve put into this is mind-blowing. I’ve always been a big fan of your work, but this story will always be truly outstanding to me.
Wow, thank you! I’m thrilled you enjoyed the story, and it’s really the best compliment a writer can get if a reader comes back to re-read. *beams* And I’m really really happy that you’re also enjoying the web design. Hooray!