Prisoners of Azkaban: Editors’ Notes

IV. Hermione Snape’s lists of the fallen

The list Hermione Snape kept in Azkaban prison was comprised of 95 names, three of which were survivors because she did not know they had lived (Draco Malfoy, Minerva McGonagall, Severus Snape).

  1. Professor Babbling
  2. Katie Bell
  3. Andromeda Black-Tonks
  4. Regulus Black
  5. Sirius Black
  6. Amelia Bones
  7. Susan Bones
  8. Terry Boot
  9. Lavender Brown
  10. Professor Burbage
  11. Cho Chang
  12. Michael Corner
  13. Colin Creevey
  14. Dennis Creevey
  15. Crookshanks
  16. Fleur Delacour
  17. Dedalus Diggle
  18. Cedric Diggory
  19. Dobby
  20. Albus Dumbledore
  21. Dudley Dursley
  22. Petunia Dursley
  23. Vernon Dursley
  24. Fang
  25. Arabella Doreen Figg
  26. Firenze
  27. Argus Filch
  28. Seamus Finnigan
  29. Filius Flitwick
  30. Anthony Goldstein
  31. Jean Granger
  32. Patrick H. Granger
  33. Grawp
  34. Rubeus Hagrid
  35. Hedwig
  36. Professor Hooch
  37. Angelina Johnson
  38. Gwenog Jones
  39. Hestia Jones
  40. Lee Jordan
  41. Viktor Krum
  42. Alice Longbottom
  43. Augusta Longbottom
  44. Frank Longbottom
  45. Neville Longbottom
  46. Luna Lovegood
  47. Xenophilius Lovegood
  48. Remus John Lupin
  49. Teddy Remus Lupin
  50. Nymphadora Lupin-Tonks
  51. Ernie Mcmillan
  52. Magorian
  53. Draco Malfoy
  54. Narcissa Malfoy
  55. Griselda Marchbanks
  56. Olympe Maxime
  57. Minerva McGonagall
  58. Alastor Moody
  59. Mrs. Norris
  60. Theodore Nott
  61. Tiberius Ogden
  62. Mr Ollivander
  63. Pansy Parkinson
  64. Irma Pince
  65. Poppy Pomfrey
  66. Harry Potter
  67. James Potter
  68. Lily Potter
  69. Eileen Prince
  70. Proudfoot
  71. Madam Puddifoot
  72. Augustus Pye
  73. Madam Rosmerta
  74. Kingsley Shacklebolt
  75. Rita Skeeter
  76. Horace Slughorn
  77. Zacharias Smith
  78. Severus Snape
  79. Professor Sprout
  80. Mr Thomas
  81. Dean Thomas
  82. Ted Tonks
  83. Sybill Trelawney
  84. Emmeline Vance
  85. Professor Vector
  86. Arthur Weasley
  87. Molly Weasley
  88. Bill Weasley
  89. Charlie Weasley
  90. Percy Weasley
  91. George Weasley
  92. Fred Weasley
  93. Ron Weasley
  94. Ginny Weasley
  95. Winky

At the very back of her diary—squeezed between the back cover and the last page—Hermione Snape wrote down a revised version of her list after Padma Patil went over the first version of her list with her on 22 August 2009.

  1. Professor Babbling
  2. Katie Bell
  3. Andromeda Black-Tonks
  4. Regulus Black
  5. Sirius Black
  6. Amelia Bones
  7. Susan Bones
  8. Terry Boot
  9. Lavender Brown
  10. Professor Burbage
  11. Cho Chang
  12. Michael Corner
  13. Colin Creevey
  14. Dennis Creevey
  15. Crookshanks
  16. Fleur Delacour
  17. Dedalus Diggle
  18. Cedric Diggory
  19. Dobby
  20. Elphias Doge
  21. Albus Dumbledore
  22. Dudley Dursley
  23. Petunia Dursley
  24. Vernon Dursley
  25. Fang
  26. Arabella Doreen Figg
  27. Firenze
  28. Argus Filch
  29. Seamus Finnigan
  30. Filius Flitwick
  31. Florean Fortescue
  32. Victoria Frobisher
  33. Anthony Goldstein
  34. Jean Granger
  35. Patrick H. Granger
  36. Grawp
  37. Rubeus Hagrid
  38. Hedwig
  39. Professor Hooch
  40. Angelina Johnson
  41. Gwenog Jones
  42. Hestia Jones
  43. Lee Jordan
  44. Viktor Krum
  45. Alice Longbottom
  46. Augusta Longbottom
  47. Frank Longbottom
  48. Neville Longbottom
  49. Luna Lovegood
  50. Xenophilius Lovegood
  51. Remus John Lupin
  52. Teddy Remus Lupin
  53. Nymphadora Lupin-Tonks
  54. Ernie Mcmillan
  55. Magorian
  56. Narcissa Malfoy
  57. Griselda Marchbanks
  58. Olympe Maxime
  59. Alastor Moody
  60. Mrs. Norris
  61. Theodore Nott
  62. Tiberius Ogden
  63. Mr Ollivander
  64. Pansy Parkinson
  65. Irma Pince
  66. Sturgis Podmore
  67. Poppy Pomfrey
  68. Harry Potter
  69. James Potter
  70. Lily Potter
  71. Ernie Prang
  72. Eileen Prince
  73. Proudfoot
  74. Madam Puddifoot
  75. Augustus Pye
  76. Madam Rosmerta
  77. Kingsley Shacklebolt
  78. Rita Skeeter
  79. Horace Slughorn
  80. Zacharias Smith
  81. Professor Sprout
  82. Mr Thomas
  83. Dean Thomas
  84. Ted Tonks
  85. Sybill Trelawney
  86. Emmeline Vance
  87. Professor Vector
  88. Arthur Weasley
  89. Molly Weasley
  90. Bill Weasley
  91. Charlie Weasley
  92. Percy Weasley
  93. George Weasley
  94. Fred Weasley
  95. Ron Weasley
  96. Ginny Weasley
  97. Winky


7 Responses to Prisoners of Azkaban: Editors’ Notes

  1. beffeysue says:

    Something bothered me about the two lists of names, and it took me a while to figure it out. Minerva McGonagall’s name is not on Hermione’s first list of the fallen. There are 95 names listed, but none of them is Minerva’s. With hers on the list there would have been 96.

    Please forgive me. I am cursed with an analytical and technical mind. *shakes head* Not good for much else, I afraid. LOL!

    Beth

    • JunoMagic says:

      Of course it’s rather sad that you have nothing at all to say besides a rather minor nitpick. However, I am naturally grateful that you pointed this tiny glitch out to me, and I’ve been happy to correct it.

  2. beffeysue says:

    I’m so sorry that I came across as such an asshat. That was never my intention. I have inhaled this story in the last couple of weeks (first on TPP and then finished on OWL today), and I left what I hope were intelligent comments for each chapter.

    There were such tantilizing hints in each chapter that kept me going from one to the next, and I love trying to connect all the dots. I am an analytical person by nature and by training, and I let that side of me take over when I came here to see the lists. I had read some of the comments that other readers had made about the Editor’s Notes on OWL, and was interested in combing through the data to see if I would recognize any of the characters missing from Hermione’s first list. I felt like Hemione with her counting.

    You are one of my favorite writers, and Prisoners of Azkaban is one of the most compelling and uniquely constructed stories I’ve ever read. I got carried away with my “dot connecting”, and I apologize for my comment here. I feel terrible about this and hope you will accept my apology. I am humbly sorry.

    Beth
    aka beffeysue

    • JunoMagic says:

      It’s okay, no worries. *hugs* In a way, I’m really thrilled you paid such close attention! I mean, in more than a year (!) of having the story posted here, you’re the first person who noticed! I just had this moment of disappointment when I thought “Wow, someone came all the way to my website for the story, wonder how they liked it” … and then it was only about the missing name. 🙁

      I still have to get caught up on replying to comments on the other sites, and I have to admit it’s very difficult for me to keep all names and addies straight between FFNet, OWL, TPP, AO3, and my own site at all times. I guess for you it felt like just one of ALL the comments you left. While for me, I’m sorry to say, it just didn’t connect with all the other comments. Lately I’ve been having an awful time with keeping even the people I interact with more regularly with straight, what with most people having different names on Buzz than on LiveJournal or the archives. I hope that explains my reaction a bit.

      And I’m so glad that the counting didn’t put you off. When I set out writing, I wasn’t sure if that “tick” I chose for Hermione wouldn’t drive people crazy. I have to admit, during the writing process, there were times when I felt it was driving me round the bend. (But I promise I never started counting squares.)

      Thank you again for reading and noticing my mistake; if you look at the list again, you’ll find the name where it belongs!

  3. Einsam says:

    I read this story over at least once a year at FanFiction.net, and this time I decided to check out the CSS3 version on your site – I loved it! All the extra little details that you just don’t get over at FF really contribute so much to the story, and the amount of time and attention to detail you’ve put into this is mind-blowing. I’ve always been a big fan of your work, but this story will always be truly outstanding to me.

    • JunoMagic says:

      Wow, thank you! I’m thrilled you enjoyed the story, and it’s really the best compliment a writer can get if a reader comes back to re-read. *beams* And I’m really really happy that you’re also enjoying the web design. Hooray!

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